roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

What do yall think of my logo??

posted 4 months ago by roudystyle36

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It’s for a sport clothing brand.

not a artist but this is what I came up with.

any suggestions to make it better?

39 Comments

  1. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    no openions??

  2. skullface - Jessica avatar

    skullface said 4 months ago

    openions don’t exist

  3. cajun metal - Josh Elowsky avatar

    cajun metal said 4 months ago

    Try a different placement for the text. The symbol is nice and symmetrical. Maybe put the text in the bar connecting the T and F. What kind of sports does this brand cater to?

  4. Perudoesitbetter - Alan avatar

    Perudoesitbetter said 4 months ago

    yeah i’d say have the text in a different placement. I like the logo mark though.

  5. Tender Branson - Tyler avatar

    Tender Branson said 4 months ago

    At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

  6. Ramvere - Corey avatar

    Ramvere said 4 months ago

    Tender Branson said: At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

    Yeah same here, first thing I read, and had to ask a second opinion and they thought fail too.

  7. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    yhea i was having trouble coming up with places for the text. also i mostly wouldent use the text with the TF logo.

    wrestling

  8. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    Tender Branson said: At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

    you serious or just trying to be funny

  9. Ameeee - Amy Brown avatar

    Ameeee said 4 months ago

    roudystyle36 said:
    Tender Branson said: At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

    you serious or just trying to be funny

    Nah I thought the same thing..

  10. Ameeee - Amy Brown avatar

    Ameeee said 4 months ago

    Also if you show the image inside emptees it’ll illicit more responses.

  11. cajun metal - Josh Elowsky avatar

    cajun metal said 4 months ago

    roudystyle36 said: yhea i was having trouble coming up with places for the text. also i mostly wouldent use the text with the TF logo. wrestling

    Oh then you’ve gotta make the fact that the T and F are interlocking (like wrestling, see) better than that. I’m seeing the flares at the bottom turned out instead of in and the letter stems put back to back. Damn now I can’t stop trying to fit T and F together in my mind. Failing a good solution for that you my try a few more options but with a rounder feel as opposed to something so sharp. Think about wrestling’s qualities and how they’re much more organic. This would do better with Motor Cross or something eXtreme but you’ve done a good job for not being an artist..

  12. Tender Branson - Tyler avatar

    Tender Branson said 4 months ago

    roudystyle36 said:
    Tender Branson said: At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

    you serious or just trying to be funny

    Being serious. Probably just because I’m so use to everyone saying fail now a days that when I see anything that starts with FA and ends with an L.. I just think fail.

    The image you have seems a bit stretched vertically too. I would change that back to being the normal height. Like this:

  13. Simply Complicated - grant tucker avatar

    Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

    im personally not a fan of it, i also that it said tech fail, maybe try going for the baseball team type layout where they interlock

  14. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    cajun metal said:
    roudystyle36 said: yhea i was having trouble coming up with places for the text. also i mostly wouldent use the text with the TF logo. wrestling

    Oh then you’ve gotta make the fact that the T and F are interlocking (like wrestling, see) better than that. I’m seeing the flares at the bottom turned out instead of in and the letter stems put back to back. Damn now I can’t stop trying to fit T and F together in my mind. Failing a good solution for that you my try a few more options but with a rounder feel as opposed to something so sharp. Think about wrestling’s qualities and how they’re much more organic. This would do better with Motor Cross or something eXtreme but you’ve done a good job for not being an artist..

    not sure i understand but mabey if you want you can scetch something out real quick and and if i dig it ill pay you to do a final draft. anyone else also if your intrested

    my email is mcnielbros@yahoo.com

  15. gaunty - Colin Gauntlett avatar

    gaunty said 4 months ago

    logo good text bad

  16. Josh | Diamond Diet - Josh avatar

    Josh | Diamond Diet said 4 months ago

    Tender Branson said: At first I thought it said "Tech Fail"

    Hahahahaha

  17. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    gaunty said: logo good text bad

    yhea i had to use a text from dafont.

    if anyone wants to do a quick scetch of Tech Fall that would go well with my logo ill pay you to do a final draft

    mcnielbros@yahoo.com

  18. Reliique - Reliique avatar

    Reliique said 4 months ago

    that reminds me of Team Fortress, i think its very similar

  19. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    Reliique said: that reminds me of Team Fortress, i think its very similar

    do you have a pic of team fortress’s logo i couldent find it on goole??

  20. Eternyl - Drew avatar

    Eternyl said 4 months ago

    I thought it said Tech Fail also

  21. Quest - Quest Cooper avatar

    Quest said 4 months ago

    hahah, is that the Batman Forever font? me thinks so....

  22. swissarmyshark - AJ Paglia avatar

    swissarmyshark said 4 months ago

  23. sblake - S.Blake avatar

    sblake said 4 months ago

  24. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    sblake said: I think it looks almost exactly like the THROWDOWN logo. Who are HUGE in the MMA world. Good luck not being sued. HAha...

    yhea i saw the throwdown logo after i drew mine up. Yhea there are some similarites but the dont look the same what do yall think?

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  25. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    Quest said: hahah, is that the Batman Forever font? me thinks so....

    yhea i had to choose a font from dafont but hopefully i can get some one to draw up a original font for me.

  26. Reykjavik - Sam avatar

    Reykjavik said 4 months ago

    Needs more originality in my opinion.
    Anything to do with branding should be as original as possible.

  27. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    Reykjavik said: Needs more originality in my opinion. Anything to do with branding should be as original as possible.

    any suggestions? I mean how original can you get with a T&F

  28. Joey - Joey Gordon avatar

    Joey said 4 months ago

    roudystyle36 said:
    Reykjavik said: Needs more originality in my opinion. Anything to do with branding should be as original as possible.

    any suggestions? I mean how original can you get with a T&F

    that’s kinda a crappy outlook

  29. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    well im no artist keep in mind and lack in the creative area. But I thought I did a pretty good job with it but I guess i was wrong

  30. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    sblake said:
    roudystyle36 said:
    Quest said: hahah, is that the Batman Forever font? me thinks so....

    yhea i had to choose a font from dafont but hopefully i can get some one to draw up a original font for me.

    Just use the same font as THROWDOWN.. done deal!

    wow you helped alot. what was the point of writing that comment?

  31. RikkiB - RikkiB avatar

    RikkiB said 4 months ago

    I think the TF looks pretty good, but your choice of font and placement makes it look like a metal label rather than a sporting one. I’d keep the TF device but make it smaller and put the text in a new font below it.

  32. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    RikkiB said: I think the TF looks pretty good, but your choice of font and placement makes it look like a metal label rather than a sporting one. I’d keep the TF device but make it smaller and put the text in a new font below it.

    cool thanks, do you think i should get another font from dafont or get one of you guys to draw me a original font for it??

  33. Tender Branson - Tyler avatar

    Tender Branson said 4 months ago

    I doubt you’re going to find anyone on Emptees that’s willing to create an original font for you.

    This is just something I threw together in a few minutes with a free font from da. Just keep cracking at it, eventually you’ll get something together that you like.

  34. Ameeee - Amy Brown avatar

    Ameeee said 4 months ago

    Niiiice one Tender Branson.. perhaps step away from the 'puter for a bit and sketch some rough things out. It can often clear the mind..

  35. jelly - Jeremy Dunn avatar

    jelly said 4 months ago

    give it boobs

  36. collisiontheory - aj dimarucot avatar

    collisiontheory said 4 months ago

    Tender Branson said: I doubt you’re going to find anyone on Emptees that’s willing to create an original font for you. This is just something I threw together in a few minutes with a free font from da. Just keep cracking at it, eventually you’ll get something together that you like.

    Nice dude what’s that font?

  37. Tender Branson - Tyler avatar

    Tender Branson said 4 months ago

    collisiontheory said: Nice dude what’s that font?

    The "Tech Fall" text is
    http://www.dafont.com/slant.font

    And the TF text is
    http://www.dafont.com/origami.font

  38. roudystyle36 - kenneth avatar

    roudystyle36 said 4 months ago

    Tender Branson said: I doubt you’re going to find anyone on Emptees that’s willing to create an original font for you. This is just something I threw together in a few minutes with a free font from da. Just keep cracking at it, eventually you’ll get something together that you like.

    wow i really appriciate you taking the time to do that thanks. you have deffintly giving me some ideas. And I like the text

  39. greens - Greens Trading Co. avatar

    greens said 4 months ago

    sblake said:

    ever hear the band trivim lol same t

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