Simply Complicated Minisite

Ok, so I have always wanted to use Tubatomic’s revolver script for a minisite, and it totally works for SC when I can figure the damn thing out, the date driven part is messing up my ordering right now which sucks but I will figure it out..

This is draft 1 of the site, I have to change some alignment and sizing but this gives a really close look to the final product what do you guys think..???

http://www.scapparel.net

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   landshark said 4 months ago

   i’m not a fan of the about page. it seems very in your face, almost like it is bringing me down. not wanting to be another line that is all about "yo, we’re fresh' is great, but i’d prefer you do that not say it, you feel?

   you have a great start with that spray can/barber poll design and you most certainly have a strong motivated foundation. however, when you start to attack the president, when your shirts have little to do with that, it seems out of place and you’re taking on too much.

   in short, i’d give it a rewrite.

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   basil said 4 months ago

   from the looks of it this script can really be effective on any site design.
   where can i find the script? im interested!

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   Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

   monuments said: from the looks of it this script can really be effective on any site design. where can i find the script? im interested!

   http://www.tubatomic.com/revolver/

   landshark said: i’m not a fan of the about page. it seems very in your face, almost like it is bringing me down. not wanting to be another line that is all about "yo, we’re fresh' is great, but i’d prefer you do that not say it, you feel? you have a great start with that spray can/barber poll design and you most certainly have a strong motivated foundation. however, when you start to attack the president, when your shirts have little to do with that, it seems out of place and you’re taking on too much. in short, i’d give it a rewrite.

   thanks for the input, yah the president thing was a metaphor i guess for how we put more thought into than he does lol, but im terrible with words i need to find a good freelance writer.. you available...?

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   Perudoesitbetter said 4 months ago

   well looks good so far man.

   Just tweak that about page.

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   Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

   Perudoesitbetter said: well looks good so far man. Just tweak that about page.

   yah thats what im thinkin lol

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   Emptium said 4 months ago

   I wouldn’t exactly attack the president.. it might turn off some of your audience.

   Other than your write-up, everything looks good

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   landshark said 4 months ago

   sure dude, i don’t know how it would help. you won’t need to be metaphorical on a level like that, as terrible as this will sound to this site, they are just shirts, ya know? being poetic off the shirt not required.

   try something like,

   "regardless of what is fresh and what isn’t by today’s standards simply complicated has one thing in mind: delivering. we aim to deliver the best products at reasonable prices to our respected customers, who will be one in a crowd when sporting our gear.... and you get the idea"

   see how you can get your point about not wanting to worry about freshness without attacking other clothing lines plan of action.

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   Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

   Mason said: I wouldn’t exactly attack the president.. it might turn off some of your audience. Other than your write-up, everything looks good

   haha thanks for the input.. but honestly... i can count how many people like bush..with my thumb.. and thats him haha

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   Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

   landshark said: sure dude, i don’t know how it would help. you won’t need to be metaphorical on a level like that, as terrible as this will sound to this site, they are just shirts, ya know? being poetic off the shirt not required. try something like, "regardless of what is fresh and what isn’t by today’s standards simply complicated has one thing in mind: delivering. we aim to deliver the best products at reasonable prices to our respected customers, who will be one in a crowd when sporting our gear.... and you get the idea" see how you can get your point about not wanting to worry about freshness without attacking other clothing lines plan of action.

   dude thats amazing can i use that?

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    landshark said 4 months ago

    treydeuce said:

    Mason said: I wouldn’t exactly attack the president.. it might turn off some of your audience. Other than your write-up, everything looks good

    haha thanks for the input.. but honestly... i can count how many people like bush..with my thumb.. and thats him haha

    i don’t support bush, but it turned me off because it came across as unwarranted and unprofessional.

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    landshark said 4 months ago

    treydeuce said:

    landshark said: sure dude, i don’t know how it would help. you won’t need to be metaphorical on a level like that, as terrible as this will sound to this site, they are just shirts, ya know? being poetic off the shirt not required. try something like, "regardless of what is fresh and what isn’t by today’s standards simply complicated has one thing in mind: delivering. we aim to deliver the best products at reasonable prices to our respected customers, who will be one in a crowd when sporting our gear.... and you get the idea" see how you can get your point about not wanting to worry about freshness without attacking other clothing lines plan of action.

    dude thats amazing can i use that?

    go fer it.

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    minte said 4 months ago

    The main frame thingy really needs to be in the centre of the screen. It feels really uncomfortable in the corner like that.

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    dougie said 4 months ago

    that looks really nice imho, i love the barbershop tee btw, nice concept...

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    LitoQ said 4 months ago

    minte said: The main frame thingy really needs to be in the centre of the screen. It feels really uncomfortable in the corner like that.

    +1... other than that, I like where its going, just keep tweakin it and keep us posted ;)

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    Nate said 4 months ago

    The gradients look funky to me and the white type is a little hard to read.

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    Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

    minte said: The main frame thingy really needs to be in the centre of the screen. It feels really uncomfortable in the corner like that.

    when i can figure out how to do that ill make it happen haha

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    heroes said 4 months ago

    u should just have one thread

    you have like a bazillion threads for your projects :]

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    Simply Complicated said 4 months ago

    heroes1985 said: u should just have one thread you have like a bazillion threads for your projects :]

    haha ok ill narrow it down

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