Looking for some advice!

Working on a design for the band Blessed by a Broken Heart with my boy Mattface!

We are stumped on what to add with our design!

Check it out, any opinions and ideas are appreciated to the max!

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   JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

   

   This is what we started with.

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   volatile v said 2 months ago

   pixellated map of the world

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   Elks said 2 months ago

   this is for a shirt correct?

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   ithew said 2 months ago

   well it reminds me of tron, old arcade videogames, and the virtual boy

   hopefully that helps...?

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   JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

   

   Leaned toward this direction.... eh?

   looks kinda blurry, but you get the idea.

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   jordanandree said 2 months ago

   i like the halftones...looks kinda crazy though.

   maybe put something imprinted ontop of the lightning? like He-man or something haha?

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   JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

   yeah, I love it. Matt hates it. We are in a bind.

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   jordanandree said 2 months ago

   yea i think it definitely fits the band...but i personally think the lightning is a but much.

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   JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

   legit dude! Maybe we’ll subtract some of it!

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    

    took out some of the lightning mess!

    I was thinking of adding something over top of it?

    The halftones look doodoo in the picture, its alot cleaner in Illy.

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    jordanandree said 2 months ago

    yea dude looks nice...ad something on top. just my suggestion though hah.

    gotta love them halftones

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    ithew said 2 months ago

    i actually liked it with more lightning...just my opinion though

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    ithew said: i actually liked it with more lightning...just my opinion though

    I really appreciate it man! I’m having a tough time coming up with something to spice it up more! I can’t just have lightning on it!

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    derekdeal said 2 months ago

    i think your text glow should break out into squares or cubes as it fades

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    thanks derek! I agree that would be sweet! I’ll see if my skills can pull that off!

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    downrodeo said 2 months ago

    A picture of the virgin Mary [Jesus’s mom], in your own illustration style. But that’s just a random though. :)

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    Jon Kruse said 2 months ago

    I think if you just pay more attention to the typography this would be killer.

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    scapyyy said 2 months ago

    derekdeal said: i think your text glow should break out into squares or cubes as it fades

    thats not a bad idea

    or maybe an arcade game or something to go like on top of it, or like something atari/super nintendo based?

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    Jon Kruse said: I think if you just pay more attention to the typography this would be killer.

    Any suggestions? The blocks sound like a swell idea!

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    scapyyy said 2 months ago

    maybe repeat the font a bunch of times getting smaller till it hit the bottom layered on top of the lightning? kinda like how i did in my wolf eyes design, but like more spread apart?

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    Sushilove said 2 months ago

    letters need to have more volume if you want to get the 80s metal effect...

    I liked the idea of putting a pixelated map of the world and make it look like an old videogame... lightnings looks good too

    I was thinking of a bikini girl with a robot head too

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    finished it! check it out in the tee section!

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    godmachine said 2 months ago

    looks good el josh.

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    JoshInvincible said 2 months ago

    thanks fred ;)

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