Crazios

Hi I’m new here and still figuring out designing for t-shirts and having a blast in the process.

This design is one that I would like to submit to DBH but would like some feedback before I do... the last few designs I’ve subbed there I have wanted to change within the 1st couple of days as a result of useful comments. So this time I would like to get some critique first if your all up for it?

So the practical stuff so far... The white 'shadow' is a halftone and would be in either a shade just lighter than the T itself or distressed/bleached. Crazios himself would be best as a water-based soft ink I think.

All or any feedback will be very welcome.
:-)