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The Audition - design vomit 3.0

posted 7 months ago by Jon Kruse

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15 Comments

  1. collisiontheory - aj dimarucot avatar

    collisiontheory said 7 months ago

    I dig the type. You might want to add some random stuff in the background for that design vomit effect lol. Why not mix it up with some abstract geometric shapes. Might be interesting.

  2. CMYK|BRAD - Brad avatar

    CMYK|BRAD said 7 months ago

    Sweet typo

  3. Elks - Ryan avatar

    Elks said 7 months ago

    collisiontheory said: I dig the type. You might want to add some random stuff in the background for that design vomit effect lol. Why not mix it up with some abstract geometric shapes. Might be interesting.

    +1

  4. Jon Kruse - Jonathan Kruse avatar

    Jon Kruse said 7 months ago

    I’ll try and switch things up and add some different styles to the background.

    What do you think about putting song lyrics in a design. I’m just using it as a texture, the font isn’t great for readability.

  5. a killer wombat - bailey avatar

    a killer wombat said 7 months ago

    lyrics arn’t bad on a design, but in all honesty this thing feels super empty to me. Id make the name bigger, bump up the lyics size wise. Jumble it... like collision said, think design vomit.

  6. Jon Kruse - Jonathan Kruse avatar

    Jon Kruse said 7 months ago

    I’ll work on it

  7. Elks - Ryan avatar

    Elks said 7 months ago

    Maybe make the background kind of like the decoration behind th A. I like the type a lot though.

  8. Kolby - Kolby  avatar

    Kolby said 7 months ago

    What does it way.

  9. Jon Kruse - Jonathan Kruse avatar

    Jon Kruse said 7 months ago

    KolbyLee said: What does it way.

    2 lbs 7 ounces .... what?

  10. Jon Kruse - Jonathan Kruse avatar

    Jon Kruse said 7 months ago

    Elks said: Maybe make the background kind of like the decoration behind th A. I like the type a lot though.

    At first I was trying to copy what was behind the letter A but it just became repetitive. I left a little behind the N and I think it gives it a nice touch. I don’t have any flourishes on hand.

    a killer wombat said: lyrics aren’t bad on a design, but in all honesty this thing feels super empty to me. Id make the name bigger, bump up the lyrics size wise. Jumble it... like collision said, think design vomit.

    I bumped up the size and there’s less open space. Every time I add more things I feel like it’s taking away from what I already have. I’ll try some more things but I’m happy with what I have so far.

  11. Jon Kruse - Jonathan Kruse avatar

    Jon Kruse said 7 months ago

  12. We're Wolf - Nicco C avatar

    We're Wolf said 7 months ago

    sweet griffin its gonna kick the shit outta that lizard

  13. Kolby - Kolby  avatar

    Kolby said 7 months ago

    I like the old version better.

  14. SPOOKCITY - Eric Wiesinger avatar

    SPOOKCITY said 6 months ago

    everything theyve been doing lately is super 80's

  15. dwbhalla - David Bhalla avatar

    dwbhalla said 2 months ago

    the type on this is wild

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