dude. That’s a bit like posting every single emptees submission with a skull on it when somebody next puts up a shirt with a skull on, which will probably be in the next half an hour.
I would work on making a few cranes at a different angle, cause you can tell that its just the same crane moved around and flipped horizontally. That will help.
This is pretty cool. I really like the skyline, but the cranes seem a little too uniform. Like wombat said, maybe change angles and very sizes a little more. Overall, it’s a great design.
Maybe get rid of the city skyline and work the outline of the cranes into their own sort of skyline. Definitely get rid of the text: no need to qualify the concept with a statement of intent. Here in Oakland the dock cranes were the inspiration to George Lucas for the ATAT’s in Star Wars. Research that and maybe you can find a good formula to apply to your cranes and the skyline. or maybe there’s some more imagery from the song that can really set the design off. As it is it’s a nicely balanced piece.
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FuzzyInk said 5 months ago
I really like the colors you’ve chosen for this tee. I actually like it without the text, unless you need that in there.
justgeoff said 5 months ago
http://www.emptees.com/tees/1347-1000-cranes
matt901 said 5 months ago
dude. That’s a bit like posting every single emptees submission with a skull on it when somebody next puts up a shirt with a skull on, which will probably be in the next half an hour.
justgeoff said 5 months ago
The cranes are VERY similar.
matt901 said 5 months ago
It’s a paper crane. They’re pretty much universal in how they are made, you can’t really get away from that.
a killer wombat said 5 months ago
I would work on making a few cranes at a different angle, cause you can tell that its just the same crane moved around and flipped horizontally. That will help.
matt901 said 5 months ago
I concur
Tang said 5 months ago
I like this a lot, looks sweet on the shirt
dannypye said 5 months ago
Cool tee man... mellow
Master_Control said 5 months ago
This is pretty cool. I really like the skyline, but the cranes seem a little too uniform. Like wombat said, maybe change angles and very sizes a little more. Overall, it’s a great design.
cajun metal said 5 months ago
Maybe get rid of the city skyline and work the outline of the cranes into their own sort of skyline. Definitely get rid of the text: no need to qualify the concept with a statement of intent. Here in Oakland the dock cranes were the inspiration to George Lucas for the ATAT’s in Star Wars. Research that and maybe you can find a good formula to apply to your cranes and the skyline. or maybe there’s some more imagery from the song that can really set the design off. As it is it’s a nicely balanced piece.
movingpangea said 4 months ago
Looks great! Would be neat if it was the Nashville skyline (what the song is about) and actual cranes (machine not bird)-- like so.