anyways, it seems just a bit too desaturated and muddy, but it could honestly just be me. maybe just use a light brown and invert it to highlight the branches instead of the dark brown shadowing on them. maybe it could just be an unnecessary color. i think the design would be just as effective if that brown was done in the same dark green outline color.
discordantart said: oh awesome, guess i should’ve been more specific.
anyways, it seems just a bit too desaturated and muddy, but it could honestly just be me. maybe just use a light brown and invert it to highlight the branches instead of the dark brown shadowing on them. maybe it could just be an unnecessary color. i think the design would be just as effective if that brown was done in the same dark green outline color.
discordantart said: oh awesome, guess i should’ve been more specific.
anyways, it seems just a bit too desaturated and muddy, but it could honestly just be me. maybe just use a light brown and invert it to highlight the branches instead of the dark brown shadowing on them. maybe it could just be an unnecessary color. i think the design would be just as effective if that brown was done in the same dark green outline color.
true.
and, i think the way you put the text on it will get really shot down at threadless, they like text bubbles. no? well, you could do something with the type, use a comicbook font, for example.
the rest is great!
Hey thanks for the feedback guys. You were spot on about the colour of the branches - guess I couldn’t see the wood for the trees! I think this looks much better
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discordantart said 5 months ago
ahahaha. i really like this. the brown bothers me a little bit, but other than that, perfect!
daleedwinmurray said 5 months ago
In what way does the brown bother you? Too light? Too dark? I haven’t actually subbed it yet so feedback would be really useful.
discordantart said 5 months ago
oh awesome, guess i should’ve been more specific.
anyways, it seems just a bit too desaturated and muddy, but it could honestly just be me. maybe just use a light brown and invert it to highlight the branches instead of the dark brown shadowing on them. maybe it could just be an unnecessary color. i think the design would be just as effective if that brown was done in the same dark green outline color.
Matt Rupp said 5 months ago
Agreed!
ez-kun said 5 months ago
true.
and, i think the way you put the text on it will get really shot down at threadless, they like text bubbles. no? well, you could do something with the type, use a comicbook font, for example.
the rest is great!
daleedwinmurray said 5 months ago
Hey thanks for the feedback guys. You were spot on about the colour of the branches - guess I couldn’t see the wood for the trees! I think this looks much better
mr nuage said 4 months ago
I prefer the version on Threadless. The font works great as it is! Very funny tee