hawthorne heights - fun

I'm really really like the colors.

man, you really gotta stop putting up a new tee right after I do. Haha. I'm kdding, but damn bro this is amazing! Your work is totally inspirational to me

detail:

any constructive critisism would be appreciated

edgillustrator said: detail:

any constructive critisism would be appreciated

hehe "constructive"....

actually i have one...i personally think you should put the counters back into the "a" and "r". that is all. if it looks bad, leave it be, if it looks good, doooo itttt!

teach me

edgillustrator said:

itschrees said:

edgillustrator said: detail:

any constructive critisism would be appreciated

hehe "constructive"....

actually i have one...i personally think you should put the counters back into the "a" and "r". that is all. if it looks bad, leave it be, if it looks good, doooo itttt!

the original sketch actually had them out, but i actually drew them way too thin and made it look really unstable, so i just took them out so it looks abit more solid :]

either way, still a great piece

wow thanks wes_allen!

justgeoff said:

itschrees said:

edgillustrator said: detail:

any constructive critisism would be appreciated

hehe "constructive"....

actually i have one...i personally think you should put the counters back into the "a" and "r". that is all. if it looks bad, leave it be, if it looks good, doooo itttt!

I think having the counters out probably actually helps make it more legible since the piece is so busy. Otherwise the letters are so thin that they'd probably get lost.

my thoughts, exactly.

amazing... i could look at it for ages and wonder...

scapyyy said: this is a really dope piece, but i think it might be a little bit to much for Hawthorne Heights.

thanks man :] haha i guess we'll just have to wait and see!

Beautiful. Love the colors too.

herky said: Beautiful. Love the colors too.

thanks alot mate!

treydeuce said: this is great i love it... i had a couple questions for you if you aim... my s/n is dAfanzi.. i wouldnt be asking here but you dont have an email up lol

haha sorry bout that man, if you want here is my email:

edgil@live.com

skullface said: you are a machine. I don't understand, but I love.

hehe thanks, it doesnt really have any meaning behind it, i just tohught it would look cool :D

Hawthorne are easy with designs. This rooolz Edgil!!

I'm speechless ...

MasterControl said: dude i'm super impressed. you're way ahead of your time.

i would actually like it more w/out the girl's face in the top left. the "heights" part doesn't really read that great and the placement kind of throws me off. i think that's the part that needs some work, but my previous statement stands!

thanls alot for that mate, i really wish i could fix the heights up, and my next piece that will be in this style will definitely not be so square and will have abit more freedom, but i definitely appreciate your critisism mate :D

whyball said: I'm speechless ...

thanks mate!

love the colors

corefolio said: great design. love it :]

means alot dude!

ChristianTW said: love the colors

thanks pal :D

Incarnadine said: Lovely illustration man! It's kinda hard to take it all in, even with the larger view you posted. It'd be nice to sit down and analyze it in tee form, haha.

haha thanks man i think im gonna be running with this style abit more :D

Setup85 said: awesome like always

+1 :)