
I was thinkin about pitchin this to Pyknic or somthin... really would appreciate some crítica constructiva... constructive criticism if you no speeka spaneech...
¡gracias!
Rejected by Pyknic... For Sale... Will Customize to your liking

I was thinkin about pitchin this to Pyknic or somthin... really would appreciate some crítica constructiva... constructive criticism if you no speeka spaneech...
¡gracias!
Rejected by Pyknic... For Sale... Will Customize to your liking
15 Comments
LitoQ said 4 months ago
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Jon Kruse said 4 months ago
Everything is dull right now. You need to get those colors popping.
scapyyy said 4 months ago
agreed.
LitoQ said 4 months ago
yeah, these guys are dull colored bottom feeders in real life so i wasnt sure about where to go colorwise I was even toying with the idea of glow ink... ill post some different colorways soon... thanks for the input tho!
Tender Branson said 4 months ago
Throw it on purple and everyone will love it. Awesome concept. Love the glow.
LitoQ said 4 months ago
haha I just took the purple down for no reason... Ill put it back up tho thanks for the feedback!
skull with hair said 4 months ago
its an angler fish, it should have a hook on the end of that thing, and be trying to catch itself!
gaunty said 4 months ago
the concept is dope, follow the advice and this´ll be a winner. Tu puedes hacerlo!!!
Jon Kruse said 4 months ago
Visually I like the glow one better but I think it takes away from your idea. The picnic basket looks less like a picnic basket, and your idea doesnt communicate as well.
Maybe you try an interesting position. Like have the picnic basket be in the front on the side and when you look at the back with the fish you get it.
Just because an angler fish is dull doesnt mean you have to make it dull. Were artists we can use our artistic license and to whatever we want like throw in hot pink and a neon green. Dont let realism stand in your way of a cool design.
KidneyLeans said 4 months ago
i like the illy
but i dont know how i feel about it being on a tee...
i think it would be an amazing poster!
LitoQ said 4 months ago
sweet idea!
Thanks for all the valuable insight bro, I really appreciate it! I understand that I as the designs have the ultimate freedom when it comes to color and composition but I thought the "dull" or muted colors would work best in contrast with the glow ( if that effect was even possible ) but I def like where your coming from with the placement Ideas... its another aspect im playin with but I wanted to post this so I could get some CC.. and you came with it! thank you!
ceccepp said 4 months ago
i like the illo inside the seaweed...,cool!!!
jaynajaynajayna said 4 months ago
Listen to Jon Kruse! Everything else about it is pretty dang solid. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
PS I dont really like that swirly thing
LitoQ said 4 months ago
Thanks Jayna! yeah man JK has some great insight, its critiques like that that keep me posting here... And yeah my wife wasnt a fan of the swirly either I was just playin around with bg elements in an attempt to better convey the underwater vibe... but i may have to nix it...heck 2 out of 2 ladies disapprove! its gotta mean somthing! lol
Robmcbride said 4 months ago
Glow one is sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. Weird, but sweet.