Sing It Loud- Bite Your Lip

posted 3 months ago by downrodeo

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   Kurzi said 3 months ago

   I really like the illustration, but the text bothers me a bit. Maybe you could try a font that matches the illu better or write the text by yourself.

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   downrodeo said 3 months ago

   Kurzi said: I really like the illustration, but the text bothers me a bit. Maybe you could try a font that matches the illu better or write the text by yourself.

   Yeah, I did one with my own handwriting, but have not upped it yet. Lets see what the goMerch dudes say first.

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   4Sevens said 3 months ago

   I think it’s very cool. Hope it gets the go-ahead.

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   volatile v said 3 months ago

   yucky text! the extra colors don’t fit.

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   Elks said 3 months ago

   yea, the text needs to be changed and the green color should be replaced.

   My Sing It Loud Design is a lot like this, except no biting.

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   illdthedj said 3 months ago

   yah, GREAT illo! i like the lips, teeth, word bubble, that little beauty mark...

   but i must say...and im sorry, but that text is REALLY bad. like, horrible honestly lol...PLUS it adds a bunch of colors to the design that are totally not needed. well, it adds two colors to it, but those 2 colors would add to the cost of the print by a whole lot. and honestly, those 2 colors dont really help the design at all.

   lol sorry for the harsh critique...and this isnt a critique submission! sorrysorry...but i really like everything about the design except the type. i could see it looking way awesome.

   def. just go with handwriting, in black, it will probably marry well with hand drawnish look of the lips.

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   downrodeo said 3 months ago

   Hey guys, thanks for the input man. I decided on the colors because if you go to their site, these are their main colors. Also, based on what they have printed before, I decided on the text.

   In all honesty though, text is my weakest link. I’m just glad there’s this place called Emptees where I can get feedback from really good designers and improve on my weaker points. Thanks dudes. I’ll wait on this like everything else, and wait for feedback via the GoMerch dudes.

   Cheers guys, thank you.

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   ithew said 3 months ago

   change the text to some kind of Comic Book type font and it will be Golden

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   dwbhalla said 3 months ago

   change the text, it ruins what is a very good design

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    downrodeo said 3 months ago

    Thanks guys: for sure top on the change list is the text.

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