LifeSureal.

posted 2 months ago by Vision_again

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   BuchananDesigns said 2 months ago

   I dig this. Some different font would be rad though.

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   Elks said 2 months ago

   yep, different font

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   Vision_again said 2 months ago

   Any type or style of font you guys would suggest??

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   discordantart said 2 months ago

   just keep the background, and bird and i’d be all about it

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   jumpy said 2 months ago

   just the waves and print!!
   a hand drawn font would suit best, and i think the bird lacks the line detail of the waves

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   Vision_again said 2 months ago

   Thats what i was kinda going for,
   Where the detail s good on the waves&Hand and then the bird was so sketchy and sureal

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   awakendesigncompany said 2 months ago

   i loveeeee this!!
   although, i would like it a whole lot better without any type. my suggestion would be to put the brand name on the back of the tee right below the neck line.
   everything else is PERFECT though!

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   Vision_again said 2 months ago

   ThanksThanks :D
   I was thinking about putting Music Notes where vision again is sort of like the bird is singing?

   And do you mean on the inside or outside of the back?

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   awakendesigncompany said 2 months ago

   the outside of the back.
   that way people could still see your line name, but it wouldn’t be so huge ya know.
   i think that’s how i’m going to start branding my clothing lines tees.

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    illdthedj said 2 months ago

    the waves are totally awesome.

    but where the waves are nice and detailed, the bird is kind of sketchy and sparse. i would suggest redrawing the bird so it fits better stylistically with the waves.

    i would also suggest making the hand and bird a tad bit smaller so theres a little more negative space on the right side.

    the type isnt doing it for me either. i would also say that this could look better if the type didnt have color, and this was a 1 color print (would be cheaper to print as well). perhaps make that type lockup smaller, smaller than the bird but still adjacent to it.

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    Vision_again said 2 months ago

    

    I dont know:P
    I think without the type theres to much room on the left?
    And do you like the music notes or should i get rid of them?
    Also i was kinda going for a "detailed" to "Sketchy" look but i dont think i made it obvious enought maybe if i put some sketchy text in the left corner?

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    illdthedj said 2 months ago

    it may be just me, but i dont think people are going to get that you are trying to go from detailed to sketchy, and just take it as if you arnt able to draw a bird very well.

    personally i think it sort of takes away from the detail you are going for in the waves, which i think look very very good.
    i think it would make the design as a whole be more harmonious if the bird was drawn in a style more closely resembling the waves.

    as for the notes, i sort of like them, but they seem too big. maybe making them smaller would help.

    just another suggestion...your text before just looked like you typed out "vision again" and then copy pasted it twice and changed the color. maybe try this : type out "vision again" once, and bring in the kerning so the letters are tight, and bring in the letting, so that the words are tight together. THEN look at that on your screen, then DRAW freehand the text. That way, it looks like the font you chose but its also drawn so it fits in with the look of the tee. then i would suggest taking that, scanning it, and putting it small and to the left of the bird.

    just throwing some ideas out there, take em or leave em lol

    but i see potential for a cool tee!

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    Vision_again said 2 months ago

    thanksthanks(:

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